Rohit looked longingly at Ritu. Ritu smiled tantalizingly at him. As she stepped back slowly with her hands hidden behind, her eyes seemed to be challenging him to grab her. Rohit was torn. Was she really beckoning him or was she simply raising his hopes again only to dash them later? Suddenly coming to a decision, Rohit moved forward slowly but steadily. She wasn’t going to get away this time. When Ritu saw him drawing closer, she suddenly raised a piercing wail. “Mummy, Rohit is trying to grab my truck again!” The antics of the twins always amused the mother.
Written for Rochelle Wisoff Field’s Fridayfotofiction.
Great twist, turned what could have been a very tense story into a smile. Well done.
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Thanks Linda!
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Amusing! Not where my mind was going at all. Lol. Truly enjoyed. Thanks for sharing
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Hahaha. Thank you Roze.
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Dear Lavanya,
Tantalizing tale with an endearing twist at the end. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle 😊
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Interesting… :=)
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Thanks ashwini
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Brilliant twist.
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Thanks Lisa
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Oh, massive sight of relief. Very clever set up!
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Thanks Jilly
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Massive SIGH of relief 🙂
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You took us all for a ride… well done
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Haha. Thanks Aks
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Great twist. Loved it.
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HAha this was interesting twist. I seriously thought something else. A bedroom scene perhaps.. 🙂 😀
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Haha.
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The last line, wow. This is what I love about fiction, the twists often bring smile on our faces. It might be a happy or shocked smile, but it always comes.
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