“What didyado, punk? Where is he?”
“I didn’t do anything, I swear. I was just playing with him and then suddenly, whoosh, he isn’t there.”
Ramu ran back in terror while Minnu ran around in circles all the while screaming Cheenu’s name. The place devoid of Cheenu’s presence stared forlornly back at him.
When Damu kaku came out his house in response to Minnu’s anguished screams, he found himself looking into the terrorized eyes of the boy whom he had privately nicknamed “THE BOY TO BE WATCHED”.
Cheenu peeked out of his underwater hideout and gave a cheeky chuckle.
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Fridayfictioneers .
This prank may come back to bite Cheenu.
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Yeah, well, The other fella ain’t so innocent either. Thanks Iain for stopping by.
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Oh dear, naughty Cheenu!
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😁
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Karma…
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Cheenu may find this comes back to bite him!
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What goes around comes around. Watch out, Cheenu.
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I am sure he is! Thanks Jilly for stopping by.
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Minnu gets his comeuppance! Fun story, Lavanya!
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Thanks Penny!
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Poor Minnu – when will they learn – fun read.
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Thanks James 😁
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Thanks for the smile Lavanya.
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Once I sorted out all the names, the story came clear. Cheenu is building up trouble for himself!
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😂
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Lovely take.
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Thank you!
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love the energy and suspense/playfulness
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Thank you!
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Cheenu is the real devil here is he not? How can he stay underwater for so long? Nice short fiction.
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Haha. Thanks for stopping by.
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